Freitag, 30. Dezember 2011 6:59
Frage von : Ich bitte um Korrektur dieses Englischen Textes?
Ich habe hier einen englischen Text zu den aktuellen Nachrichten dieser Woche zusammengefasst.
Stimmt das so?
Bomb attemp in Portland
A 19-year old islamist planned to fire a carbomb on Friday during a celebration in Portland.
With the bomb attack he wants to kill many people. When he wanted to fire the bomb, the explosive charge was inactive. Policemen hauled him. The Islamist is arrested now.
Solving of the two killings in Bodenfelde
The 26 years old man admitted to be the murder of the two victims who died. He killed a 14-years old girl, who reacts against his approaches. He killed the boy because he was at the murder scene of the girl at this time. The offender was arrested now.
Decision of the winter tyres obligation
The upper house of the German parliament decided the winter tyres obligation in Germany. The winter tyres are important for the safety on the streets in the wintertime. Persons, who get caught by the police, have to pay 40Euro fine. People hoping for less accidents on the streets with the new obligation.
Stuttgart 21
On Friday and Saturday were meetings with Heiner Geißler, the mediator and the proponent and the opponent in the townhall. The proponent and opponent argued once again for the billion project Stuttgart 21.
Mediator Geißler doesn’t believe to reach an agreement. He also said that a popular vote is unrealistic. On Tuesday, the mediator will declare his arbitrator’s award.
Beste Antwort:
Answer by nefarious
A 19 year old islamist was planning to explode a car bomb on Friday during a celebration in Portland. He intended to kill as many people as possible. When he actually tried to set the bomb off, it fortunately turned out to be a dud. The Islamist is now under arrest.
Bodenfelde murder quest solved
A 26 year old man admitted to killing a 14 year old girl and a 13 year old boy who apparently had to die because he witnessed the girl being attacked by the 26 year old. The man is in custody now.
Winter tyres obligatory by law
The German parliament ruled winter tyres to be obligatory. Failure to comply with the new rule will result in a 40 € fine. Officials are aiming to decrease fatal accidents during the winter months.
Stuttgart 21
Meetings were being held in the townhall on Saturday with Heiner Geißler acting as a mediator between the conflicting sides of the project. No agreement could be reached over the one billion Stuttgart 21 project between the opposing sides. Geißler doesn’t believe that he will be able to settle the dispute and that a popular vote is unrealistic.
The arbitrator’s award will be announced on Tuesday.
Sieh’ es noch mal durch, hab’ n Grammatikfehler drin. Sollte soweit akzeptabel sein.
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